The Time Machine by Daniel Clausen


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Post May 05, 2014, 03:50:18 PM

The Time Machine by Daniel Clausen

This is pleasant and entertaining. Is this "New Wave"? It felt very soft, abstract, almost mystical.
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Post May 26, 2014, 09:24:08 PM

Re: The Time Machine by Daniel Clausen

That was very nice. The theme of going back to childhood repeats, but at the very end, you're left not knowing exactly what's happened, but hoping they made it.
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