Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan


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Post May 07, 2014, 12:15:10 AM

Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan

An entertaining fish story. I liked the intelligent villains.
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Post May 07, 2014, 07:51:05 AM

Re: Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan

LOL. I guess it is a fish story isn't it? Love it!
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Post May 13, 2014, 10:26:17 AM

Re: Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan

This was good and a very interesting take, in fact as I think about it, it was better than good and totally unexpected.

Congratulations and a Flash well told, hook the reader, set the hook deeper into his or her brains and then leave them stranded wanting more.

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Post May 13, 2014, 11:10:20 AM

Re: Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan

Thanks you're a chum!
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Post May 13, 2014, 11:54:37 AM

Re: Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan

are you baiting me?
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Post May 13, 2014, 12:43:19 PM

Re: Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan

I have you hooked in a pun war! I am truly a master baiter!
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Post May 13, 2014, 01:00:43 PM

Re: Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan

There are a number of jokes re going blind but they never made sense to me.

later friend.

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