Post May 05, 2014, 07:43:59 PM

The Spider and Immortality by Zahid Zaman

It was terrific. My one critical thought was this: wasn't she eventually making herself too young then she would not have been able to properly exert her will over the old woman or properly trap her victims?
Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong. – Neil Gaiman