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The Secret by Lela Marie De La Garza
Good flash. It felt edged and hard very quickly. I appreciate how well the dialogue was written. The end was good as well.
Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong. – Neil Gaiman