The Secret by Lela Marie De La Garza

Good flash. It felt edged and hard very quickly. I appreciate how well the dialogue was written. The end was good as well.

[Lester Curtis]

Very well done!

It turned a different way than I began to expect when Merrill told of free energy -- at that point, I immediately suspected murder. When the little girl made contact, I thought the dead professor would name his killer.

Oops. Not that story, and I was pleasantly surprised by the difference.