Tipsy Rambler Richard H. Fay


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Post March 04, 2014, 08:57:35 PM

Tipsy Rambler Richard H. Fay

I respect the many poetic forms used here. The subject appeals to me as well. Huzzah!
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Post March 04, 2014, 09:11:06 PM

Re: Tipsy Rambler Richard H. Fay

Welcome back, Richard.

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Post March 07, 2014, 10:12:49 AM

Re: Tipsy Rambler Richard H. Fay

This is a nice little poem which creates a dark mood through repetitive use of "o" and "r" sounds. It's very cool that you incorporated the concrete element "D o w n." I did a concrete poem once that I shaped like a snake. I think it would be fun to do more, but complicated concrete poems might be difficult to reproduce on a webpage.

I'll second Mark's sentiment; I hope this means we'll get to read more from you on Aphelion again Richard. :)

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Post March 19, 2014, 12:17:09 AM

Re: Tipsy Rambler Richard H. Fay

Share some of that drink with the rest of us. Seems rather powerful.

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