Post January 05, 2014, 12:17:12 AM

Macromal by Pedro Blas Gonzalez

The title of the entity is fairly clearly "the big evil".

This tale is a bit unevenly constructed; the first part hides the key plot point for quite a while. Then the plot peak occurs with several heavy speeches by the entity almost gloating. But suddenly it is swept away ... and the story ends.

From the length of the setup, the intermezzo, the big speeches, it feels like a four act story that's missing the fourth act. Some of climactic battle from this monster and ... whatever can take it down.