Blood Oranges by Ashley Dioses


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Post December 27, 2013, 12:31:22 AM

Blood Oranges by Ashley Dioses

This one was going along pretty well, but it seemed to run out of steam after the scene change (where the * * * is). Creepy.

I liked the use of names and scents.
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Post December 27, 2013, 08:52:55 PM

Re: Blood Oranges by Ashley Dioses

Hmmm thank you for your opinion. I will take a look at that part for future reference. Glad you like it.

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