while on Pluto by Denny E Marshall

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Post October 19, 2013, 08:07:03 PM

while on Pluto by Denny E Marshall

I'm assuming based on the syllable count of this poem (5-7-5-7-7) that it is a Tanka.
I like the twist: Who left the sign? Is this just a little jab at the International Astronomical Union? :)

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Post October 27, 2013, 10:13:36 AM

Re: while on Pluto by Denny E Marshall

I've read this somewhere else or something very much like it on this website.

This is too familiar.

I do like it.


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