A Higher Aim by Dave Weaver


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Post March 20, 2013, 06:43:21 PM

A Higher Aim by Dave Weaver

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Post March 20, 2013, 09:23:40 PM

Re: A Higher Aim by Dave Weaver

Very interesting twist. Different kind of politics. Don't get rid of the President, get him reelected. Need a bit more on the turning of Oswald. Or was it Oswald?"

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Post April 05, 2013, 10:32:07 AM

Re: A Higher Aim by Dave Weaver

An interesting take on the events of that day.

Quite short, the writing was good.
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Post April 13, 2013, 03:39:26 PM

Re: A Higher Aim by Dave Weaver

Great job! Very nice setting detail, and the plot was a real surprise. I didn't take a word count, but this could have won a flash challenge.
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Post April 16, 2013, 08:18:16 AM

Re: A Higher Aim by Dave Weaver

(Early Context Notes Cont.)

This one is very short, so it runs more holistically. "Sorta Now", but it at first swings within a range. Let's see...

Again checking the Alternate History, this doesn't seem to be about a second future president who also happened to get assassinated at Dealy Plaza, so then it just reverts back to a sort of oblique mood piece on the Kennedy event in 1963 with no apparent SciFi elements of "Looking Back" or time travel etc. If there are, they are very subtle and "off the page".

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