scifaiku by William Landis (poem)


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Post March 20, 2013, 06:32:26 PM

scifaiku by William Landis (poem)

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Post April 06, 2013, 03:23:26 AM

Re: scifaiku by William Landis (poem)

Okay, I don't normally comment on works that I don't like, but Tao encourages me to do so and maybe I need to trust that the writer knows I have no ill intent.

I don't care for this type of poetry. With poems that are 8-12 words in length, it is not touching me emotionally. It is at best, delivering a cold, intellectual message. Little to know imagery. Hard to enjoy.

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