Seventh Tower story by D. S. Tierney


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Post February 18, 2013, 12:38:22 PM

Seventh Tower story by D. S. Tierney

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Post March 08, 2013, 03:02:36 PM

Re: Seventh Tower story by D. S. Tierney

I don't generally gravitate to fantasy, but this story was quite well done. Characterization and dialog were very good; characters were economically portrayed, yet distinct and credible.

I did get a little confused with setting, particularly in the architecture of the tower. Best I can figure, it had to be mostly underground. Not bad, though.

The plot was very good as well, with an unexpected twist to it.

I could easily imagine this as one of a series of adventures, and I think this author is capable of accomplishing such a project. But, rather than go back and describe the previous six tower break-ins, I'd like to see where this thief and the girl go from here.

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