"Sleeping Dogs Lie" by I. Verse


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Post November 07, 2012, 07:46:42 PM

"Sleeping Dogs Lie" by I. Verse

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Post November 09, 2012, 08:59:17 PM

Re: "Sleeping Dogs Lie" by I. Verse

This is a wonderful piece of work. Very cleverly constructed -- and it's got heart.

I didn't fully understand what was going on until very near the end, and then it all made perfect sense.

Plot, setting, characterization, dialog, pacing, tension, conflict, climax, denouement -- Verse makes it all look easy. Not once was I taken out of the story; everything is just right.

Read this thing, if you haven't yet.

You won't be disappointed.
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