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Post September 20, 2012, 09:07:24 AM

Here's One For Mr. Serling... by P. B. Hampton

Burp!

Yummy, maybe there's more in the tin wrapper!


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Post September 21, 2012, 08:05:08 AM

Re: Here's One For Mr. Serling... by P. B. Hampton

Absolutely does what it says on the label.

The final line was just perfect.
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Post September 24, 2012, 05:57:59 PM

Re: Here's One For Mr. Serling... by P. B. Hampton

This really did remind me of the Twilight Zone. Very spooky.

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Post September 27, 2012, 09:34:13 PM

Re: Here's One For Mr. Serling... by P. B. Hampton

Wa-hoo!

Mr. Serling would have indeed been delighted. Spot on.
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