Post August 28, 2012, 11:23:51 AM

Zombie Pets by Mike Berger

This is a fun idea. I, in fact, recently wrote an editorial elsewhere about my fear that the evil Callie, my cat, would rise from the dead.
I did wonder about the grammar in some of the lines:

"redouble his efforts with my friends
shrieked with delight."
Was this supposed to be redouble his efforts when my friends
shrieked with delight? I can never tell with poetry.
Also, there's a sentence in which the verb tense changes - "It was...it is brutally..." Did you mean to do that because it's confusing.

I do like the idea, especially as All Saints Day approaches. This was better than 'Pet Cemetary' for me...which went on and on and on...
Since the house is on fire - at least let us warm ourselves.