Post May 31, 2007, 08:12:19 PM

Re: On the Corner of Galaxy and 5th

I haven't read these before. My only take on them so far is that these two parts don't "feel" the same, for lack of a better word. Less of a sense of wonderment or fun in the wording this time. Maybe it's a pacing issue.

That's rather nebulous, I'm afraid, but I'm failing to say it any better. It's still interesting, and I am looking forward to the rest.

Nate
Last edited by kailhofer on May 31, 2007, 08:12:55 PM, edited 1 time in total.
Hardcover, paperback, pdf, eBook, iBook, Nook, and now Kindle & Kobo!
Image
A cooperative effort between 17 Aphelion authors. No part of any sales go to Aphelion.